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first of all, as much as i love the shins, i would not use new slang for an edit, especially one involving jumping like that. i would also say mix up the angles on the jumps. The flow seemed to be a little choppy becuase of the fast paced, large jumping from you and then the slow rails from other dude.
btw, you slayed those jumps, carved cork 7 = pure sex