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Just finished my English essay

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Ya_like_jazz
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I tryed to listen to all of your advice and here is the final product
Jan 28 2019 12:04PM
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Idahoe
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First mistake: Listening to us for help on an English essay. besides that, its pretty gud.

ok i just read it for real: why is it so short?

**This post was edited on Jan 28th 2019 at 1:00:10pm
Jan 28 2019 12:10PM
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DirtYStylE
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Second mistake: you didn't listen to me. This was English 101 stuff. You need 5 paragraphs. Introduction with three supporting claims. One paragraph for each claim then the conclusion paragraph. cmoooon
Jan 28 2019 12:21PM
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MFZOREN
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The paragraphs are each like a sentence lol. You might be pretty young or something but a paragraph usually needs to be at least 5 sentences. The double spaces aren't fooling anyone,
Jan 28 2019 7:43PM
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Coochieman7
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sauceboss420The paragraphs are each like a sentence lol. You might be pretty young or something but a paragraph usually needs to be at least 5 sentences. The double spaces aren't fooling anyone,

He is 12 and also retarded
Jan 28 2019 10:28PM
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TRVP_ANGEL
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ctrl + A, backspace.
Jan 29 2019 9:53AM
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HypeBeast
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Hold the following for liftoff: windows + E
Jan 29 2019 9:55AM
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xxACIDTRIPxx
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You expect me to read all that? Where the fuck is the cliffs
Jun 19 2019 5:35AM
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vibecheck
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Coochieman7He is 12 and also retarded

Uh oh not the r word!
Oct 28 2020 9:22PM
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MiIfHunter
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vibecheckUh oh not the r word!
Oct 28 2020 9:23PM
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vibecheck
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MiIfHunter🐶 💨


REEEEE word

**This post was edited on Oct 28th 2020 at 9:25:05pm
Oct 28 2020 9:24PM
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Bended_Toenail
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Lmao reading that was funny, until I saw you were an 11th grader. When I was a junior I wrote 14 pages on AI and got a B+. I can't imagine what kind of grade you got on that.
Oct 28 2020 11:52PM
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yungona
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Bened_notnilLmao reading that was funny, until I saw you were an 11th grader. When I was a junior I wrote 14 pages on AI and got a B+. I can't imagine what kind of grade you got on that.


the teacher saw how much of a fucking nerd you are lol... anyways... 14 pages in junior year? how the fuck is that allowed?
Oct 29 2020 12:28AM
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Bended_Toenail
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yungonathe teacher saw how much of a fucking nerd you are lol... anyways... 14 pages in junior year? how the fuck is that allowed?


Lmao probably, there was someone in my class that year that wrote 36 pages on why Trump is bad and then got it published somewhere. She was a nerd. the essay was supposed to be over 10 but idk.
Oct 29 2020 10:34AM
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ASAPCarter
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Even though it was short...
Dec 24 2020 4:32PM
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dawnbailey1974
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The essay is pretty short. I would suggest extending it. But to be honest, it's better to ask for advice really qualified people or compmanies like https://www.the-essays.com/ instead of strangers on the forum. Nobody knows if the forum user has enough knowledge of experience to suggest some meaningful ideas.

**This post was edited on Apr 14th 2021 at 6:13:45am
Apr 14 2021 6:12AM
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JosefD
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I enjoyed your essay. Personally, I have always had a hard time with this assignment. And another advised visit site where I found a helper for writing my academic assignments. It helped me a lot and left my nerves at peace.
Apr 22 2024 8:43AM
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