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gnarRat
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Its not skiing but its a little edit of my first two months at cu Boulder let me know what you think!

https://youtu.be/mh3gG--oz1k
Oct 30 2017 3:31AM
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HarkStudios
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Filming is pretty decent, I personally would have used a song that wasn't so overplayed, but it works. The transitions are nice, all in all if it was a ski edit i'd dig it. some potentially decent B-roll for an edit down the road.

Nice job!
Oct 31 2017 11:48AM
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Park.
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I have no experience but I determine the quality of an edit by how it makes me feel, and that gave me a certain feeling that probably lines up with the vibe you were trying to make.
Nov 20 2017 2:00AM
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P-wurps
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Thought I'd reuse this thread for the same thing.

Was pretty excited right after opening weekend so I didnt take as much time as I probably should have with this, but wondering what could be done better? ie. less slow-mo, more interesting/smoother transitions, better/different angles (park was packed so it was tough to get a whole lot of creative shots), more B-roll, etc.
let me know!

https://www.newschoolers.com/videos/watch/883033/Spirit-Mountain-Opener-2017

**This post was edited on Nov 23rd 2017 at 8:00:37pm
Nov 23 2017 7:35PM
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gnarRat
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all I would say is just get more footage. get cinematic shots of the lift, of the snowy trees, get b-roll to transition shots and in the beginning add an intro song/use a song with a dope intro because the slow mo sounds of the skiing is annoying but its a dope edit!
Nov 23 2017 9:25PM
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akt416
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personally i think this is sick af
Nov 26 2017 8:35PM
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