CatzarecoolzThis is sort of a personal thing but when I make videos I tend to intertwine the music With the video, so deops, landing, scene changes, stuff like that with typically match the music. I think that it really helps pull everything together which is really what you're striving for with the audience.
One of the most important aspects of a good edit, in my opinion. You don't just throw a music you like on your edit, you make the music work with the images. It really makes everything work together so much better. But it's not easy and requires a good ear, a good eye and some editing experience.
Other than that, a lot of useless shots in there. Some good ones though. And as already said, intro is way too long.