Jwenz-Editing was a bit wierd...there was a lot of filler shots that were at urban spots then you went to park shots right after. Kind of confusing continuity wise and Id work on that. Also it was weird to me seeing the mix of urban shots scattered throughout the park shots. It seemed like you only hit a few spots so I see how you wanted to incorporate them but maybe keep them seperate next time. Just a weird flow there.
-Audio: there were some parts that you had audio and some that you didnt...I noticed you didnt have an external microphone so it may have been bad audio that you were working with and I understand that. Keep that in mind for increased production quality next year.
Thanks! Yeah for the weird editing flow most of the riders wanted to have their own segment with all their shots, but for next year I'll just have one segment for all the urban shots, it'll be way more easier to watch. For the audio I'm planning on buying an external mic this summer, thanks for the feedback!