The shots were all pretty similar. Same length, same angles, same subject, same location. The edit would be 10x more interesting if you went to different locations with different backdrops. Another important thing to do is mix up your angles. Get a couple close ups and maybe an establishing shot of somebody just riding down the street filmed from further away. It would be good to have a couple longer shots in there too. Maybe you could get on a board and to a follow cam so you can keep the subject in the shot for longer.
It would have been cool if you had timed the transition from the intro clip to the drop of the music. I would have taken out the fade between the shots and just dropped the music right at the transition.
Edits like these can be really cool if you find a really scenic place to shoot them so that would be one thing to start looking for.