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Some rap I wrote, you'll dig it

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The_RaginAsian
Posts: 677 - Karma: 3,002
Check my latest song, pretty stoke on this:
https://soundcloud.com/little-willum/comin-down

I got a couple more too, if you wana scope them, here's the link to my profile:

What do you think? Ya dig?
Mar 13 2014 9:32PM
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eastcoastplanker
Posts: 964 - Karma: 70
don't quit your day job kid.
Mar 13 2014 9:47PM
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The_RaginAsian
Posts: 677 - Karma: 3,002
word. thanks for the appreciation homie
Mar 13 2014 9:50PM
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Chubz.
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That beat was super dope. The bars weren't that bad but your voice was mad monotone. So id work on that.. But overall it wasnt that bad I dont think
Mar 13 2014 9:51PM
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The_RaginAsian
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yo thanks. kinda tryin to go for that, im not tryin to be a singer, im just talking ya know
Mar 13 2014 9:53PM
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epapageorges
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I thought it was pretty dope
Sep 2 2015 2:40AM
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.Hugo.
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Rough.....
Sep 2 2015 6:58AM
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Lonely
Posts: 6609 - Karma: 59,753
The_RaginAsianyo thanks. kinda tryin to go for that, im not tryin to be a singer, im just talking ya know


It's not so much about singing as it is having style. The bars are good but when you just stay in monotone it doesn't have the emotion behind it.
Sep 2 2015 7:29AM
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Deepskier
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Chubz.That beat was super dope. The bars weren't that bad but your voice was mad monotone. So id work on that.. But overall it wasnt that bad I dont think


100% this it was sick until you came in it sounded like you were asleep
Sep 2 2015 1:24PM
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Puzzled
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Chubz.That beat was super dope. The bars weren't that bad but your voice was mad monotone. So id work on that.. But overall it wasnt that bad I dont think


Its a classic DJ Premier beat... and OP your flow is goddamn awful...
I'm just being honest here.
Sep 2 2015 5:14PM
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