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This is pretty dope. What are you using to make it, FL? the beat and bell intro are nice. The gun cocking sound effect is a little out of place and the synths that come in around :50 are a bit cheesy. Throw some automation on them, adjust the velocities of each MIDI note to sound more natural and give it some dynamics, maybe layer on a few more subtle synths, and you're golden! Good work man