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Critique my First Short Film Please ++++++++K

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AK_Media
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This is my first short film, real short film. It casted, I wrote it, the whole shabang. Give it a look, give it a comment. Thanks guys!

May 2 2013 11:45PM
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gravel
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Really really really really well done. I thought that was great. Only quarrel that I'd have with it is that the ending was a little quicker than I might have liked, but overall incredible.
May 3 2013 12:45AM
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AK_Media
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I agree, it was rushed due to time constraints with the actors, especially the kid actor
May 3 2013 1:39AM
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De-Clan
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real dope (pun intended)
May 4 2013 5:22PM
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homestar
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That was really good. The only issue I had was that some of the audio was too quiet.
May 4 2013 7:30PM
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*Fujative*
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Very nice overall. Story was good. Like already mentioned, it could have been a little shorter.

Ha, for future reference if you want to show someone snorting, used powder milked!
May 4 2013 8:35PM
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