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Looking For Some Feedback on my Personal Music Video!! Thanks Everyone

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swaggastupid
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I got About 28 Other videos and new ones every week so sub my channel if youd like to.
But id like to get your opinion on my Brand New Official Video!

Here Is The Link!

Jan 13 2013 1:10PM
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MNS
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Remove the part with the canadian flag. I'm from Canada and it embarrassed me to find out you are too. Pls n thx.
Jan 13 2013 2:11PM
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will_powder
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You can't just put the "bad tv" effect over mediocre shots and call it art. Same story with the black and white. Honesty you just cocked the camera sideways and threw a terrible effect over top.
Jan 13 2013 2:35PM
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Ryan.Street
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You can't start rapping @0:45 when the song is 1:50 long. Also the effects are too much
Jan 13 2013 2:38PM
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MatRich
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nothing nice to say about this
Jan 13 2013 2:43PM
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987321654hgfd
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Jan 13 2013 2:45PM
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swaggastupid
Posts: 66 - Karma: -6
Thanks for the Feedback.. I understand my editing is subpar due to my lack of experience. This is probably only the 5th full music video ive completed but will take your advice and use less effect with my next!
Jan 13 2013 3:14PM
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MNS
Posts: 5386 - Karma: 3,241
dont go on like "im hot as the sun" "people say this about me" and all that stuff

no one knows who you are or listens to your music yet, and certainly it's not true and people dont say that shit often. maybe one person said it.

i mean, isn't it clear that a million kids trying to be rappers go on about this shit? there is other stuff to rap about your know..


Jan 13 2013 3:41PM
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swaggastupid
Posts: 66 - Karma: -6
I understand what your saying about millions of kids trying to talk about how much money they make and all that but im actually making money from my music and have worked with lots of upcoming rappers. you will see popular artists with me in my videos soon!
Jan 13 2013 3:55PM
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Kirsakid
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Learn to rap and actually be good before making another video. If you decide to make another please do not include the Canadian flag so people won't associate you with my country.
Jan 13 2013 3:56PM
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swaggastupid
Posts: 66 - Karma: -6
and simply what i meant when i said " if you was on what i was on youd be hotter then the sun" meaning my confidence and my mindset that I'm in has gotten me to where i am and been able to work with real dope artists on the come up that fuck with me has brought knowledge to me that if i grind hard enough whatever i want to acheive will happen.
Jan 13 2013 3:58PM
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grown-ninja
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Rapping was terriable
Jan 13 2013 4:05PM
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ryano
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hahaha.. this is the worst music video i've ever seen.

i could make something better with my cell phone and windows movie maker.
Jan 13 2013 5:16PM
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BeefiestExpert
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The rapper sounds like Krispy Kreme
Jan 13 2013 6:55PM
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nagger
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I was going to post this
Jan 13 2013 7:09PM
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