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first thing- audio, audio, audio. Needs some work. Some wind and a lot of peaking.

Also, I kept wanting to know who was talking to me...as in, I was waiting for an interview shot or something where I could see his face (maybe even a lower thirds title?)

White Balance, was another thing I noticed. Just go through and double check your white balance shot for shot in post before you export. In addition to this, some shots were a bit overexposed..but there is only so much you can do for that in post.

Otherwise, nice variety in your shots.

Hope this helps,

I completely agree with both of these statements.

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audio was horrid. shots need to be framed up better, and instead of going strait into a close up of the knee or anything for that matter have an establishing shot so the audience knows whats going on and it makes sense.

thanks a lot....everyone got +k

this was my "fixed" audio the original was even worse unforunately