you get better and better at those edits!
really, the only thing i think you should have done with the last edit was:
1. color grade it, the footage looks a little to raw/bland
2. you should have ordered it differently based on person. i thought the first guy was the best and the last guy was the worst (by worst, i do not mean bad, he was still quite good, but not as good compared to the first guy). you should edit with a buildup and the tricks or people get progressively better as the edit continues.
otherwise, well done!
oh, maybe consider a faster shutter speed? not really that important, it looked good, but for action/tramp i personally favor a faster shutter!