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Help me with my BYOB design.

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lorax
Posts: 1296 - Karma: 85
hey NS. I am revising my BYOB entry and I would love your feedback. here is my entry. If you have anything valid to say about things i could change do better or omit please let me know thanks. Thanks. Click for larger image
Nov 2 2011 7:07PM 0 0
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NinetyFour
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would be sick gnar if you could make those k2 logos into more of a snowflake shape, you know? Keep the sizings on the logos slightly different like you have now though. Very nice stuff, that is a quality walrus.
Nov 2 2011 7:10PM 0 0
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crab_pretzel
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im diggin the bases. alot like what theyve done with all their bases but is still original. looks good
Nov 2 2011 7:11PM 0 0
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lorax
Posts: 1296 - Karma: 85
yeah that would be sick, how do you guys feel about the orange in the tips?
Nov 2 2011 7:14PM 0 0
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SpaghettiWizard
Posts: 2825 - Karma: 165
put like a child playing in the meadow
Nov 2 2011 7:14PM 0 0
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Algebra
Posts: 5215 - Karma: 1,665
Real sick. My only idea is mabye make the white on the bottom that light blue and make the light blue a Saroyan navy value tealosh color
Nov 2 2011 7:15PM 0 0
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levirecycles
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i dont really like the orange. take that away and it would be sick.
Nov 2 2011 7:53PM 0 0
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Kangbanger
Posts: 135 - Karma: 9
Good luck trying to beat that other dude's entry who actually has some artistic ability.
Nov 2 2011 7:58PM 0 0
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whoa-dere
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i like it! make k2's in the middle of the topsheets less cluttered, maybe even taking all of the ones in the middle off, and have a gold weaving pattern run from the orange to the walrus
gold weaves kinda like the curvy ones on this strap here
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Nov 2 2011 8:02PM 0 0
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HIRO
Posts: 548 - Karma: 34
Troll or absentee, since the deadline was yesterday
Nov 2 2011 8:09PM 0 0
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Inline.
Posts: 4424 - Karma: 423
make the walrus less solid, more faded.
Nov 2 2011 8:09PM 0 0
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lorax
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nah i got 2 more days. I emailed a dude at k2.
Nov 2 2011 10:37PM 0 0
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B-runge
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You're fucked!
have you seen this?
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Nov 2 2011 10:44PM 0 0
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lorax
Posts: 1296 - Karma: 85
i have i'm ready to accept it but i'm just hoping that if I make a good enough revision, maybe the fact that those look a lot like most k2 skis will work in my favor, since maybe they are looking for originality. not hating this design is AMAZING just trying to find a reason not to just quit. The reason I made this thread was so that maybe this kid could have some competition.
Nov 2 2011 10:50PM 0 0
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a_pla5tic_bag
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where can you see all the entries anyway?
Nov 2 2011 10:52PM 0 0
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Furrer92
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Those look super like a pair of obsetheds, not so much fujas, either way they look sick.

I agree with what the other person said about toning down the blue K2 on the topsheet, really cluttered.
Nov 2 2011 11:02PM 0 0
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CK.
Posts: 1615 - Karma: 106
minus the walrus and your golden
i personally would never buy skis from k2 but that design would defiantly make me think about it lol
Nov 2 2011 11:21PM 0 0
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Kangbanger
Posts: 135 - Karma: 9
But your design sucks anyways so no competition. Don't even try to fix it. No one wants another topsheet of a logo plastered in a cube pattern all over it
Nov 2 2011 11:33PM 0 0
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lorax
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ok and no one wants another cynical gypsy douche cluttering their thread, I know my design isn't good. I'm trying to make it better. With all due respect I don't think yours would be much better.
Nov 2 2011 11:59PM 0 0
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gravel
Posts: 4740 - Karma: 31,329
this. at least he wants to work hard to make it better. nothing wrong with trying.
Nov 3 2011 10:27AM 0 0
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LeoSpaceman
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someone ate a box of crayons and puked all over some skis..
Nov 3 2011 11:13AM 0 0
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CheddarJack
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Hahaha now that I look at it, that's a very good representation. But for this thread's design, I think you should only have the K2s on the black part of the top sheet. Like said earlier, it's kinda cluttered. It'd make the walrus stand out a little more too, which would be good cuz the walrus is sick.
Nov 3 2011 1:41PM 0 0
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coldcuts69
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i like the walrus, hah but instead of where you have the purple on the topsheet, have it be orange?
Nov 3 2011 1:47PM 0 0
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lorax
Posts: 1296 - Karma: 85
good idea. Thanks man.
Nov 3 2011 9:39PM 0 0
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roddy116
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illest skis ive ever seen in mah life
Nov 3 2011 9:53PM 0 0
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marsh.
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these actually look pretty cool. way better than this years obsethed IMO
Nov 3 2011 11:29PM 0 0
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skihoney
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Hey There... I like where your design is headed, but I think the deadline was October 31, although as of yesterday the submission site was still up.
Nov 4 2011 12:33AM 0 0
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lorax
Posts: 1296 - Karma: 85
i have an extension.. welcome to ns!
Nov 4 2011 12:46AM 0 0
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