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Burton Bowl Feat. Ian Compton.... PLEASE CRITIQUE!!

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thisandthatfilms
Posts: 7713 - Karma: 525
please critique my newest edit!!


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RATE IT UP!!!!

https://www.newschoolers.com/ns/content/viewvideo/id/449055/

https://www.newschoolers.com/ns/content/viewvideo/id/449055/

https://www.newschoolers.com/ns/content/viewvideo/id/449055/

https://www.newschoolers.com/ns/content/viewvideo/id/449055/

https://www.newschoolers.com/ns/content/viewvideo/id/449055/














+K!!!








Sep 16 2011 5:14PM
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Childstar.
Posts: 1947 - Karma: 2,212
the starting seemed over edited and actually made me feel sick and dis-oriented.
Sep 16 2011 11:33PM
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thisandthatfilms
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sorry
Sep 17 2011 2:26AM
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Jakx~
Posts: 653 - Karma: 503
Gonna have to agree. i know that must have been really hard and taken a long time. but it was just uncomfortable to watch. But i really like the rest of it, and also the text placement was really nice.
Sep 17 2011 10:43AM
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skituner
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sorry but i really didnt like that, over edited and pretty much no variety of shots in the skating part
Sep 17 2011 12:13PM
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Canadianfreeride
Posts: 281 - Karma: 227
song?
Sep 17 2011 12:19PM
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thisandthatfilms
Posts: 7713 - Karma: 525
Shempi - Ratatat
Sep 17 2011 5:44PM
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Troy.
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Way too many jump cuts, sir.
Sep 17 2011 5:52PM
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Balto
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this, don't do that every again, it looks horrible
Sep 17 2011 6:23PM
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NE.
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i actually enjoyed this just because it was different from what i've been watching lately
Sep 18 2011 4:27PM
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