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Crit my slowmo skate edit?

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mattytru
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Skateperception is being lame and not giving critique so

http://vimeo.com/27994117 (not embedding so you can watch in hd on vimeo)

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in 720p heh


i was basically testing out overcranking 60p to 24 and my new tokina 11-16. i know the colors are kinda off in places, but what i really want crit on is how to improve my edits in general (and dont suggest film burns lawl).

thanks everyone, it's really appreciated
Aug 22 2011 1:41PM
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Stang*
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i mean, i dont know what to say, i just feel like it was to slow and repetitive. Im not sure what you were going for but i kinda got sleepy watching it. Im not big into skating so i may not be the best source. If i were you i would choose a song that had a little change in tempo or something. but this is just my opinion.
Aug 23 2011 1:33PM
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blakroc
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it was well done, would have been nice with more variety of shots but none the less good. what do u mean by overcranking 60p to 24

Aug 23 2011 2:44PM
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WillStart
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same thing as conforming
Aug 23 2011 3:06PM
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holyDINOSAURS
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well you're not really overcranking. youre just shooting 60p.

and yeah..I don't know. it was slow and boring. not really how i like to watch skating
Aug 23 2011 3:21PM
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WillStart
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yeah this. overcranking is really an in-camera thing
Aug 23 2011 3:52PM
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holyDINOSAURS
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also implying that you're shooting faster than the camera was designed for. somehow hacking a camera with 60p mode to shoot 120p would be overcranking.

ANYWAYS now that thats cleared up :)
Aug 23 2011 4:32PM
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juicedrummer11
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a little bit too much slow mo for the shots that you had, just mix it up a bit between slow and real time, and work on color correcting a bit and that should help
Aug 23 2011 7:38PM
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plorr
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Well I'm pretty sure nobody's doing any "cranking" at all on their DSLR's. I always thought of undercrank/overcrank as just a general term for fast motion/slow motion. That's just me though.
Aug 23 2011 7:50PM
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WillStart
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yeah.

but on my HVX, when you shoot at 720p60:30p, that's called overcrank mode.

when it comes down to it though, true overcranking is cranking a film camera to expose more than 24 (or whatever frame rate you use) frames per second, then playing it back at 24, right? so technically i guess conforming is actually more like overcranking than doing it all in the camera
Aug 23 2011 8:57PM
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[tk]
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it looked really good, i would just say have a better shot selection. im not really a fan of crash shots in 2 minute edits, but if you are going to put them there, put them all together in one place, either at the beginning or end or whatever. it makes it hard to watch when it keeps switching in between them
Aug 23 2011 9:35PM
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Gnarwall
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The ride away to trick ratio wasn't good. Also, in the beginning you had like three shots from the same angle of the skater. I'd really try to switch them up. close up of his torn up shoes, half his face, the texture in his jeans. Anything that adds flavor and texture and doesn't just say "oh, there's a person".
Aug 23 2011 10:21PM
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thebmxican6
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preety good and i skate acton once in while, only thing is its a little to slow but nbd

Aug 24 2011 11:09AM
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