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WidespreadMedia.
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Title says it. Thanks, also if youre going to talk about color stuff, sorry i can not work with colors, i am part colorblind, so i dont know how to fix them hah

Jul 5 2011 10:02PM
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eheath
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You need to work on your camera handling, alot of shots are mad shakey and poorly framed. Also, you need to not shoot on auto, your auto exposure changed your exposure in every shot you had movement in. Cut out the cheezy 4 window thing and the black fades and the zooms in the middle of tricks. use fades and zooms for transitions, not in the middle of the trick.
Jul 5 2011 11:29PM
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deleted2
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your filming was quite repetitive, and the shot of the woodward sign at the begining was too saturated and not to visually appealing
Jul 5 2011 11:40PM
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deleted2
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oh shit sorry bout the color critique didnt read your post thoroughly
Jul 5 2011 11:41PM
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WidespreadMedia.
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Thanks e, i know exactly why they were shaky, i used some crappy wal-mart tripod and i was using a 70-200 f/4, so it was too heavy for the tripod, but i just bought a fluid head so that will be fixed. Ill work on the manual exposure, thanks for that. I was just kinda messing with the effects i have, i couldnt tell if that effect would come out well, thanks though.
Thanks for helping me out again
Jul 6 2011 9:30AM
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eheath
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word, a nice tripod will help out a ton. And the only way to learn is to try, everyone goes through phases of certain effects, etc. you'll get it nailed.
Jul 6 2011 9:41AM
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