It felt like you were trying too hard to be artsy. I really don't like time lapses and focusing shots at all because they are overused so much. The song went well with the filler but really didn't fit at all with the type of riding. Dont get me wrong, it was pretty good, it could be better though.
And Usain Bolt is running down the side of the field, he's got the ball, he's still running, WHERE THE F**K IS HE GOING?!?! USAIN BOLT HAS LEFT THE BUILDING...WITH THE BALL.-BIG-DUMP
some of the close up slow mo shots were eh. and also the font of the titles just isnt doing it for me. but overall it was good
"I'm new so I don't know very much, but I do know that Arabian is gay and that one kid fucked his cousin" -ryantheconnolly
"Hahaha so how exactly did it go down? You had your penis in her, but she wanted to do this "soaking" thing, so what happened? Did you just kinda hang out and talk while your dick was getting soft inside her?" -AR6rider$
I always struggle with text and font type so I understand what you're saying if the fonts didn't work for you. As far as too artsy goes, I'm happy the way the edits turned out so besides some of the slo motions I don't think I would have changed too much more. I really do appreciate your comments though, thanks for helping me out. Stay tuned for more if you liked it!
if you're planning on using a good amount of slo-mo shots in your edits, get a camera that can shoot 60fps, or if you have one that can, then DO IT. it looks so unprofessional to me when you can see the individual frames in a slo-mo shot.
The joy I get from skiing, that's worth dying for - RIP CR Johnson
I could only watch the second one but I really like some of the times lapse shots, especially the one with the stars in the back and cloud up front. Maybe start the edit with more banger tricks like the flips...takes a while to get goin