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My attempts at the FirstDrop contest +K for replys

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JaayLaay
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Put these togethor kind of quick..tell me what i should improve, and which you like best. Thanks.

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Feb 23 2011 9:14PM
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Dlud
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This will be my submission


Feb 24 2011 4:17PM
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JaayLaay
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Feb 24 2011 5:24PM
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TonKwon
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Last two are sick, would rock those all day. Good job.
Feb 24 2011 5:26PM
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Skittle.
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dope
Feb 24 2011 5:26PM
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JaayLaay
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thanks for all feedback
Feb 24 2011 5:34PM
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Whale
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Bdog rip off eh? Look sick though.
Feb 24 2011 6:06PM
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MAXWELL.
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4's dope mayb someother colors? the rest are sick too
Feb 24 2011 6:23PM
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JaayLaay
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unintentional bdog ripoff
Feb 24 2011 6:51PM
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Wesley.P
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Feb 24 2011 7:06PM
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Broseph_Stalin
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make a rasta one, try to use 3 colors instead of 2.

thats all the advice i could think of
Feb 24 2011 7:08PM
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Jonny7
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and then every kid on here will jack off to it. Rasta is so over rated
Feb 24 2011 7:15PM
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JaayLaay
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Rasta is overated IMO
Feb 24 2011 7:54PM
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SlurbnBeef
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To me all are sick, but on #4 put something on the front of the jacket. Also the T-Shirt is pretty awesome.
Feb 24 2011 8:04PM
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DADDYlongLEGS
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that's sick
Feb 24 2011 8:08PM
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JaayLaay
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yes the Tee Shirt is pretty awesome.. ++++K toooo all
Feb 24 2011 8:15PM
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D3NZ3L
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they would look really nice if u got better colors, darker, like saga's colorss
Feb 24 2011 8:16PM
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JaayLaay
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If this was a Saga contest i would do that. Its a FD contest.
Feb 24 2011 8:17PM
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11..11
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those are pretty sick, secon last one and the green one i think it was second or third? and the last one id definetly do the secod one though itd also be sick as a sweatshirt
Feb 24 2011 8:40PM
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A_Harrington
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T is so sick black and blue are a good color to use for jackets ;)
Feb 24 2011 8:42PM
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melbs
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The green and black one is so dope
Feb 24 2011 8:42PM
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JaayLaay
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good feedback keeep it comin
Feb 24 2011 8:51PM
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daskis
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I haven't seen much navy blue around... Try navy blue instead of black, and pair it with 1 or 2 more light colors. Maybe white and yellow?
Feb 24 2011 9:09PM
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JaayLaay
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I was actually thinking of trying white and yellow.
Feb 24 2011 9:11PM
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daskis
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I think that'd be cool, but make sure you put in a darker color. Use white as an accent because it gets dirty fast, and not everyone can rock it.
Feb 24 2011 9:14PM
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JaayLaay
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will do. should i throw in the navy blue or something?
Feb 24 2011 9:16PM
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Wesley.P
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this is what my white and yellow would look like. i think its actually pretty sickClick for larger image
Feb 24 2011 9:20PM
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SNPskier
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thas ill
Feb 24 2011 9:22PM
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JaayLaay
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Pow i would appreciate if you made your own thread ha im tryin to get MY feedback.
Feb 24 2011 9:24PM
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Wesley.P
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Sorry dude
Feb 24 2011 9:26PM
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JaayLaay
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its all good.
Feb 24 2011 9:27PM
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pennstater
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pink and black purps n black n pink n blue
Feb 24 2011 9:42PM
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dylanb
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put that pocket on the front of the pants instead of the back
Feb 24 2011 9:50PM
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Ilovewhitestuff
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4 is dope, make one with a redish burgundy, and light blue
Feb 24 2011 9:53PM
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JaayLaay
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Im working on the blue,yellow,and white right now. Should be able to squeeze the burgandy and light blue in soon. At the end im going to have a vote to see which one (ones if you can submit multiple) i should submit
Feb 24 2011 9:55PM
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JaayLaay
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BUUUUMMMPPP
Feb 25 2011 8:21AM
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wait.what
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I really like the back with the black and white lettering. I'm not to fond of the pink and yellow though:(
Feb 25 2011 9:48AM
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tuomas-p
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One samll logo in front of the jacket, then it will be perfect.
Feb 25 2011 10:03AM
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fillup
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FirstDrop has to be the ugliest shit i have ever seen. Its like a retard is playing paint the colors but only has two.
Feb 25 2011 10:14AM
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JaayLaay
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++++++++++++++K to all
Feb 25 2011 12:55PM
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Whalefail
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2 that i made. feedback/critique
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Feb 25 2011 3:21PM
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KingTaco
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the green and black one was money
Feb 25 2011 3:27PM
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daskis
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Yeah!
Feb 25 2011 3:32PM
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Six.0.Tree-ski
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threads.
Feb 25 2011 4:39PM
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-Mugatu
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Feb 25 2011 4:42PM
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p-oskier
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4 & 5
Feb 25 2011 5:21PM
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wesley.
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the fd logo looks like male genitalia
Feb 25 2011 5:22PM
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Zimmerman
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#4 pants look like theres a dick going up your ass.
haha but those are all sweet good work
Feb 25 2011 5:35PM
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Bittner
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just playing around..on paint since i dont have adobe yet..
NS Likey?

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Feb 25 2011 5:36PM
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JaayLaay
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all go to my other thread to vote!!
Feb 25 2011 5:40PM
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585.
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thats awesome
Feb 25 2011 9:49PM
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