too much focus on the signs, it gets redundant. there should only be one shot of a sign in there. the rest should be nice looking shots of the mountain/ facilities. Also the vignette is too strong. i would take it off
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that entire intro could have been done in 12 seconds. Way too repetitive and boring. I don't have much else to say but tell a story with your shots. When you read a book do they repeat the same sentence 5 times? No. So don't repeat that sign a million times. Yes, a few different angles is fine, but each individual shot was too long. More creativity... kind of bland and cliche shots. Get ARTSY!