what exactly are you looking for? a timelapse is a timelapse, and u made a timelapse...now if u want to know about your creativity, and ur artistic concept that was put into this, then ya I think u couldve made it better. for example when it switches from the first shot to the tree, maybe have a different angle so its not the same exact position, twodifferent shots are more interesting than two similiar shots.....just my 5 cents tho
Make all them faster. The first two were almost identical compostitionwise, so i wouldnt plan on using them both. I liked the second to last, and the last one a lot tho. Try switching up your lenses too.