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My first dubstep track.

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meth_time
Posts: 2783 - Karma: 21
Just a work in progress but I'd like some feedback.
Quality is kinda bad in certain bits and it only downloads to aiff currently.

Old enough to party. by Rusty Nails

This is produced by me. I didn't dj it or do any of that dumb shit. The sounds r mine, n biggie smalls's.
Oct 28 2010 9:35PM
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Scrambles
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I liked it until 1:00 then it just got annoying (props though, usually I hate dubstep)
Oct 29 2010 12:11AM
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meth_time
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the schecky build up? or the drop?
Oct 29 2010 12:32AM
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Scrambles
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the random dubstep noises in the build up, but this is a dubstep track so I'm just whining because i don't like the genre.
Oct 29 2010 12:38AM
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meth_time
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lolwut.


Kay well thanks for the feedback, bout the only somewhat positive response I've gotten on it.
Oct 29 2010 12:41AM
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Gstrong
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what i think of your first dubstep track.
Oct 29 2010 2:51AM
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meth_time
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What is this, I don't even...


Oct 29 2010 3:17AM
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DMA_Studios
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From my professional opinion, I believe that this picture is calling your first dubstep attempt a leap.
Also since it is a lamb, i think he might also be calling it a noob leap.  Which is not neccesarily a bad thing.  I mean, you are a dubstep making noob, and the attempt is a leap. Thus Noob-leap.

haha, srsly though. I liked what you were going for. keep working on it brohammid Ali.
Oct 29 2010 5:41AM
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hellomynameisjef
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i liked the beat, and i liked when the low voice said party, but the biggie vocals ruined it for me, they did not fit at all
Oct 29 2010 10:30AM
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Bloom.
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I thought they actually went well. I liked it.

The song sounds too empty though, fill those spaces in

What you using?

I use ableton and massive for bass
Oct 29 2010 12:40PM
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thelizards
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I didn't really like the emptiness like the other guy and I wasn't a big fan of the effects/noises used on the vocals and bass/beat. But I mean it's your first track, you'll make much better.
Oct 29 2010 12:44PM
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EH_DUBS
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Like they were saying, kinda empty, needs more flow. Also imo the biggie lyrics don't really belong there.

Maybe that was just the quality but also maybe try making a sort of simple "sub" bassline to go under everything for atmosphere.

First song though man keep it up
Oct 29 2010 3:34PM
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yuck
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not gonna lie, it sounds like my speakers are trying to pump out a massive shit. no flow. and the biggie was.. creative?
Oct 29 2010 5:53PM
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.Max.
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From 0:46-1:06 it sounded like someone was farting on cue.

It was pretty cool though, some more time and I'm sure you'll make it good.
Oct 29 2010 8:38PM
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