My first edit.

heres the link

I'm going to recommend you one thing, never use songs that are in popular videos or well known edits. Such as this one which was used in Everyday is a Saturdays movie trailer. It just makes your edit look really bad because everyone is expecting something that is really good because they have seen something with the same song. Plus it looks like you have no creativity because you went and chose a song that was already used.
Basically choose your own song, and make the clips flow with the music. One question why didn't you just put the video up as 1 thing?

You need to get the bangers on beat .
You cant use deadmau5 unless you run shit.
Don't show the same trick more than once.
Put more time into the progression of trickery and it will have better flow.
Use lifestyle shots accordingly, mostly during slower parts of the song.

alright thanks yeah i get what your saying. and when i went to upload it to youtube it said the file was to big which is stupid cause its only a 5 minute video but then when i tried to compress it it wouldnt work so i just uploaded it in two dffernt parts.

my honest advice: dont use songs from big ski parts...its never as cool as it seems. use something that no ones used before

thanks yeah i defiantly wont next time.