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Alex=God
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<object width="400" height="300"><param name="allowfullscreen" value="true" /><param name="allowscriptaccess" value="always" /><param name="movie" value="http://vimeo.com/moogaloop.swf?clip_id=8111187&server=vimeo.com&show_title=1&show_byline=1&show_portrait=0&color=&fullscreen=1" /><embed src="http://vimeo.com/moogaloop.swf?clip_id=8111187&server=vimeo.com&show_title=1&show_byline=1&show_portrait=0&color=&fullscreen=1" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" allowfullscreen="true" allowscriptaccess="always" width="400" height="300"></embed></object><p><a href="http://vimeo.com/8111187">12.9.09</a> from <a href="http://vimeo.com/user1077027">Alex Brewster</a> on <a href="http://vimeo.com">Vimeo</a>.</p>


first real one I have done. Whatcha guys think
Dec 10 2009 10:35PM
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Alex=God
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of course


http://vimeo.com/8111187

+k for embed
Dec 10 2009 10:36PM
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.jr
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12.9.09 from Alex Brewster on Vimeo.


Dec 10 2009 10:43PM
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Alex=God
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thank ya buddy
Dec 10 2009 10:45PM
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.jr
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you bastard child stole one of my songs!

edit - kinda reptitive which makes it unexciting, also watch your shadows, I hate seeing the filmer in there..
Dec 10 2009 10:48PM
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Ham.and.Cheese
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I thought the chairlift was a little long and random because it's the only day shot but other than that if you had more shots it would be easier to get critiqued because there's not much editing involved with half a song and one box, not hating just trying to help you out
Dec 11 2009 12:53AM
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uni-corn
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Film people that don't suck.
Dec 11 2009 2:00AM
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A.Eberhard
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I agree with the people above that time-lapse of going up the chairlift was long and very slow speed that time lapse up! It was weird the random black parts of the video did you add those in because if you did they didn't go well with the song. Change up the angle a bit and if they didn't land don't put the clip in because i think the first or second one you either cut it to fast or he didn't land.
Dec 11 2009 3:41PM
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RightAsRainFilms
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turn frame blending off.  please for the love of god.


Dec 12 2009 12:47AM
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*Fujative*
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Same. Daylight chairlift.. Nighttime skiing... And it was a bit long.

Try different angles, follow cam or something else to mix it up.

The music was synced nice though.
Dec 12 2009 12:24PM
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cultrara
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try differnt angles
Dec 13 2009 11:13AM
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