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iamghood
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this edit was probably the most time consuming one ever!!

just leave some comments on what you think could have been better

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Oct 21 2009 7:35PM
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iamghood
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Oct 21 2009 7:37PM
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Six.0.Tree-ski
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thats a pretty solid edit. i know how hard that masking is, it fucking blows. props
Oct 21 2009 10:29PM
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Turner.
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yeah your editing was pretty seamless.
skating coulda been better, but definately a solid edit. nice work.
Oct 21 2009 10:37PM
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iBake
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Jesus that was sick as shit, I can't imagine how long that must have taken you. Now all you need to do is find some better skaters to film.
Oct 21 2009 10:44PM
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ski-swagga
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it was sick! and i think the skaters were fine.
Oct 21 2009 11:06PM
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clifhucker40
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dude that was sick! what program did you use to edit that??
Oct 22 2009 11:23AM
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Big_Spence
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1. There were a few parts where it could be masked a little better, but for the most part it was spot on.
2. It's like a minute too long. Cut that shit.
3. Wasn't exactly my choice of music, but it matched it pretty well.

Props overall.
Oct 22 2009 11:45AM
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Coalescent
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I like how people say the skating could be better.  I personally thought the skating was pretty solid for how young the kid looked.

Oct 22 2009 1:23PM
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KarmaInitiative
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very creative, i know how hard that stuff can be
Oct 22 2009 9:43PM
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.jr
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around 1:06 it gets super sloppy, notice the kid in the background mostly, fix that up and itll be way better.
Oct 22 2009 11:25PM
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iamghood
Posts: 46 - Karma: 10

thanks guys..  It was hard with lighting on that day because there were so many clouds

i used after effects cs4 to edit it and a canon HF100 for filming!

Oct 24 2009 11:53AM
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miroz
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Entertaining to watch - cool idea.  Editing must've taken forever.  I would've liked to see some more creative shots, but at the same time you were really limited because of the masking to come.  Overall pretty sick man, I'm a fan.
Oct 24 2009 2:00PM
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EH_DUBS
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pretty sick. masking gets some wows all the time :P

what id try now is to work on tracking so your shots arent just still and you can have some camera movement. even just on some shots scaling it up a bit and doing some digital drags if you dont want to do tracking for everyshot.

a couple shots where the riders over lapped kinda glitched out a bit. but i can tell your new at this and you still did a good job.
Oct 24 2009 3:19PM
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nonexistant
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Ok, that was pretty damn cool I must say, a great job and real good skating...but I have to ask...did you take the name, idea and even title text straight from the Knife Show?
Oct 24 2009 8:09PM
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TURTLEMAN1
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dude that was totally worth the minutes of life that it gave to me!!!!! awesome!!
Oct 24 2009 8:17PM
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iamghood
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haha i knew some people were gonna ask me if i took this from knifeshow... actually filmed all of this and started editing before knifeshows video came out.. so i didnt even know that they were doign something similar
Oct 25 2009 10:35AM
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Six.0.Tree-ski
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thats lies
Oct 25 2009 11:35AM
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Fry077
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pretty good id say, im tryin masking for my video class in highschool so i know how hard it is to get it just right, there was one part on the picnic table where the right side moves like right at the end of the shot, but it was pretty good non the less. question: how do you do the titles at the start, been wondering for so long!!
Oct 25 2009 1:23PM
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nonexistant
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Knifeshow has been around for much longer than just that one video posted in ski gabber? a week or so ago.. I'm not being a dick, just sayin. Still impressed with the edit though, maybe you can come up with something else thats equally as epic but brings something of its own to the table.
Oct 25 2009 3:33PM
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.jr
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So you started filming 2 years ago? When you were 12?
Oct 26 2009 6:55PM
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iamghood
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no no no you guys.. i started filming this before knifeshow came out with the snow clones video.. i had no idea they were doing pretty much the same thing i was
Oct 26 2009 8:23PM
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.jr
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kid no one believes you. Snow clones came out well over a year ago. And I wasnt paying that much attention, but if that ^^ kid is right and you stole the same text then thats super fishy.
Oct 27 2009 12:30AM
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nonexistant
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^haha exactly.Text is not identical but verrrry similar.
Oct 27 2009 6:22PM
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iamghood
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snowclones came out in may.. that is not even a half of a year ago.

thats fine if you guys dont believe me...

Oct 29 2009 11:15AM
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-ROY-
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tommarow!! chea rep that shit
Oct 30 2009 12:48AM
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butteredpretzel
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nice man i just made an cloning skate edit like that
the bitch about filming them sperately is the shadows and lighting can change between shots, and its really obvious after editing....
but word good job
Oct 30 2009 2:11AM
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iamghood
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thanks man
Nov 4 2009 11:07PM
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freeski_Shaggy
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Why are people bitching about if it looks like snow clones?

The kid still did the work and it looks pretty good. Who cares if someone did it before, that just dumb.

Props to the kid who did this.
Nov 4 2009 11:15PM
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dylansiggers
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exactly, sick edit man, clones are a pain to edit
Nov 4 2009 11:38PM
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.jr
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Because he claimed that he has never seen snow clones, and that he started filming before they did.

Clearly not true, unless this was filmed last summer.
Nov 4 2009 11:39PM
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freeski_Shaggy
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Oh wow, cause its such a big deal. He still did the work.
Nov 5 2009 8:54AM
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.jr
Posts: 5313 - Karma: 356
So you wouldnt mind if my trailer this year was exactly the same as lets dance? I will claim it as my own and say that Ive never seen your trailer..
Nov 5 2009 11:02AM
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freeski_Shaggy
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I might find it amusing, and feel kind of honored that you would want to put out the same kind of work I do. Not to mad tho.

But, yea ok the text is the same as is the effect, but I mean its a different sport. I would do the same thing with skiing if I was trying to learn how to do that.

Maybe he is lying and is is directly copying their work, that shit happens, yea lying about it isnt cool but its whatever. I'm really not seeing the big deal here.
Nov 5 2009 1:34PM
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.jr
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I dont think you would feel so honored if you had this new idea, I saw it and attempted to copy it, then I blatantly told everyone that the ideas were mine.

"lying about it isnt cool" see thats the point Im trying to make, I couldnt care less that he took their idea, shit happens all the time, but to claim it as his? Thats going to far.
Nov 5 2009 2:20PM
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nonexistant
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I completely agree with despite. here.and not once has anyone said that it was a bad job or that it sucked, in fact the opposite. I think that the job done is amazing and props for some good work. ( also by the way, to the other poster...there IS skateboarding in snowclones ) its just that what he has said is simply not true.
Nov 5 2009 4:52PM
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