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Some grammar help please (+K for help)
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just had like 50 things to fix on a sheet of grammar mistakes, and i cant get these two. im sure the mistake is pretty obvious, but im not that great at grammar so im having trouble with these last two.
A revolution is when the government changes hands as a result of a violent uprising.
and
He often forgets his office key at home.
Thanks (and + K for all who help)
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A revolution is when the government changes hands due to a violent uprising.
i think thats right
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he forgets his office key at home often.
not sure on that, but the best i can think of
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He often FORGOT his office keys at home.
but it made sense the other way also.....
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He continuously leaves his keys at home
maybe?
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we learned the first one last year. you dont say when, or where. say
"a revolution occurs when"
or
"a revolution happens when"
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A revolution is when the government changes hands as a result of a violent uprising.
and
He often forgets his office key at home.
Change it to:
During a revolution, a government changes hands as a result of a violent uprising.
and
Often, he forgets his office key at home.
Twas just a matter of commas and clauses.
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A revolution is when the government changes hands as a result of a violent uprising.
and
He often forgets his office key at home.
Change it to:
During a revolution, a government changes hands as a result of a violent uprising.
and
Often, he forgets his office key at home.
Twas just a matter of commas and clauses.
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often he leaves his office key at home.
i dont think saying that he forgets his office key at home makes sense
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^yeah. id say "Often" or "often times, he forgets his..."
All times are Eastern (-4)
