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PATRON
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dont be afraid to be straight forward

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Sep 17 2008 5:37PM
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PATRON
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Sep 17 2008 5:39PM
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k-rob
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honestly, the only one that catches my eye is the first one. but keep it up.
Sep 17 2008 6:03PM
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ParkE
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the first one and the courtyard are pretty sick.
Sep 17 2008 7:49PM
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1080ski
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first- dope pic for sure, but i think you could have exposed it a tad longer maybe? it just seems a tiny bit dim overall (not a lot more exposure, but just enough to accent the brighter colors)

the one with the horizontal pipes- i really like this one but i would like to see the focus a little further left, i think its too far to the right and its a little odd to look at.

last one is super sick. props
Sep 17 2008 8:11PM
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PATRON
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anyone else
Sep 20 2008 1:18PM
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Malcolm
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im really liking the last one for some reason. i know jack about photography but it seems like the last one could tell a story or something
Sep 20 2008 1:33PM
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Pippin
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okay heres what i think:

compositionally i think you are a strong photography, leading lines, rule of thirds, filling the frame...and so on, you seem to have that down, maybe look into into capturing some strongers more vivid colours, touch up with post processing......but yah what camera are you shooting with?
Sep 20 2008 1:48PM
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popNfresh44
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Sep 20 2008 2:55PM
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PATRON
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panasonic dmc fz20
Sep 20 2008 3:59PM
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steezyjibber
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asian boy is the best
Sep 21 2008 9:38AM
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