Member of the Month

PartyBullshiit
March, 2024

Online

Welcome to the Newschoolers forums! You may read the forums as a guest, however you must be a registered member to post. Register to become a member today!

Feed back on this segment

profile picture
iLLbiLLy
Posts: 2865 - Karma: 2,631
well ive been workin on a segment for my vid for a few nights now and i just cant make it click... heres the vid http://media.putfile.com/charlie-wilcoxs-segment

Im not sure if its the song or the editing.. i would start over but i accualy like the first 45 seconds- tell me what you think i should do with it.
May 30 2006 9:36PM
0 0
profile picture
forfun
Posts: 4916 - Karma: 66
that was siiiick. the song was awesome too; Immortal Technique is dank
May 30 2006 9:43PM
0 0
profile picture
iLLbiLLy
Posts: 2865 - Karma: 2,631
btw im gona take this vid off in like 2 hours so if it stops workin thats why
May 30 2006 9:53PM
0 0
profile picture
crooks
Posts: 14693 - Karma: 786
i thought it was sick, i have the same last name too
May 30 2006 9:57PM
0 0
profile picture
SnowRidgeParks
Posts: 2146 - Karma: 88
great song choice, ive always wanted that to be used in a segement. i think the only problem with it was that you didn't use the song to its full potential. you just need to edit more around the song and make things fit better. right now it isn't bad, but if you can make things fit together better and flow more with the song it will be really sick...
May 30 2006 10:04PM
0 0
profile picture
nipe
Posts: 2586 - Karma: 6
props, nice vid, I wish I went to app when i lived down there.
May 30 2006 10:04PM
0 0
profile picture
Scratch*my*Back
Posts: 8334 - Karma: 160
not a fan of that lens effect but yeah sick.
May 30 2006 10:04PM
0 0
profile picture
FUUUCK
Posts: 18426 - Karma: 4,888
somethings missing, i cant quite place my finger on it
May 30 2006 10:08PM
0 0
profile picture
iLLbiLLy
Posts: 2865 - Karma: 2,631
thats how i feel... i think its kinda has to do with the shots.. i only filmed the kid on 2 days for a few hours so theres not much vairation
May 30 2006 10:21PM
0 0
profile picture
7X
Posts: 2999 - Karma: 365
yea, its realy good skiing. i would take out the misty 7 it didnt have a grab. As far as the edit, the skiing is too happy and fun looking to go along with an immortal song. maby if you put some b&w filters and make it grainy to fit the song better. and maby up the contrast a bit.
May 30 2006 10:22PM
0 0
profile picture
Hotdawgg-Skier4
Posts: 295 - Karma: 39
you got good skiing and editing but lose the circle thingy... jep
May 30 2006 10:27PM
0 0
profile picture
iLLbiLLy
Posts: 2865 - Karma: 2,631
its a fish-eye and its on just about every shot because we only filmed for about 2 hours
May 30 2006 10:29PM
0 0
profile picture
TONYDANZA
Posts: 181 - Karma: 2
Way to much inrun on the shots and out runs. That lens has got to go for next year. I think what is missing is variety, you are in the same place hitting the same jumps and rails. Nothing wrong with that, but you need to have more creative angles to make it more exciting.

Nice jumping, all you can do is make the most out of what you got.
May 30 2006 10:31PM
0 0
profile picture
timmi
Posts: 12874 - Karma: 3,460
looks sick to me.
May 30 2006 10:31PM
0 0
profile picture
Hotdawgg-Skier4
Posts: 295 - Karma: 39
ok wutevs dude it different so i would say go for it.
May 30 2006 10:31PM
0 0
profile picture
skirbrt88
Posts: 1090 - Karma: 23
i think the fisheye was annoying and distracting and unnecesary, songs dope, editings pretty good, skiings good but i think the lack of variation and the lense is holding u back
May 30 2006 10:36PM
0 0
profile picture
Beamer12
Posts: 3227 - Karma: 46
sick but im not into the constant fisheye ..gets annoying after a few minutes
May 30 2006 10:37PM
0 0
profile picture
Crock360
Posts: 2100 - Karma: 23
I know what it's like to not have much footage to work with. So far you've done a good job of mixing up what shots you have, and not just putting the same shot over and over. You can also "flip" the image to make it look like a different angle. Only works if there are no words visible though. Not a fan of the song choice, but you can make it work. It has a nice catchy beat; use this to it's full potential. the shots seem too long. You be a little "artsy" here and use jump-cuts that are cut to the beat of the song. If you're doing it on purpose, you can make it work and look good. Try different speeds as well. I liked how the follow cam stuff sped up between hits, but all the other stuff seemed to be at the same speed. Try leaving some stuff in real-time, or close to it. Once in awhile put the real slow-mo effect in to emphasize the difficulty of the trick. I noticed you tried to do it in once place, but it slowed down the most on the landing, which was a little sketchy. Just one video guys opinion... HOpe this helped.
May 30 2006 10:42PM
0 0
profile picture
iLLbiLLy
Posts: 2865 - Karma: 2,631
yea, its a lil smoother when you watchin it in hd also...
May 30 2006 10:47PM
0 0
profile picture
Desjardins
Posts: 1772 - Karma: 11
i think that was a pretty good edit, but maybe less of the circle thing
May 30 2006 11:39PM
0 0
profile picture
FUUUCK
Posts: 18426 - Karma: 4,888
i think its because its all followcam with the fish eyed lense, what can you do though
May 30 2006 11:50PM
0 0
profile picture
Schoening
Posts: 14332 - Karma: 1,266
good edit / skiing but god that lense is just obnoxious with the black shit around it
May 30 2006 11:59PM
0 0
profile picture
newskool
Posts: 87 - Karma: 10
good song. fish eye kinda wierd but was good that you had variety. do floatier 180's
May 31 2006 12:14AM
0 0
profile picture
willski18
Posts: 16 - Karma: 37
lookin good
Jun 1 2006 1:38PM
0 0
profile picture
quebecfreestyler
Posts: 13040 - Karma: 1,418
not enought colours in all those shoots
Jun 1 2006 1:44PM
0 0
profile picture
JiberXxL
Posts: 45 - Karma: 10
yea lens is anoying
Jun 1 2006 1:47PM
0 0
profile picture
K2_Pubz_360
Posts: 906 - Karma: 10
better skiing and editing than me
Jun 1 2006 5:30PM
0 0
profile picture
Silence
Posts: 16030 - Karma: 149
sick edit..
Jun 1 2006 6:30PM
0 0
profile picture
BFINO13
Posts: 1563 - Karma: 14
sweet edit since you dont have that much footage and immortal technique is sick where is that place?
Jun 1 2006 6:37PM
0 0
profile picture
[lineskier]820
Posts: 923 - Karma: 11
my only advice is lghten the color up or something it just seems dark, but it was really nice, keep it going
Jun 1 2006 6:55PM
0 0
profile picture
BeLeiVeTheHyPe57
Posts: 738 - Karma: 10
typical.
Jun 1 2006 7:42PM
0 0
profile picture
Grimace.
Posts: 8345 - Karma: 25
Click for larger image

I THINK IT SUCKED DICK
Jun 1 2006 7:51PM
0 0
profile picture
Grimace.
Posts: 8345 - Karma: 25
Click for larger image
u suck at sking
Jun 1 2006 7:55PM
0 0
profile picture
r5tommy
Posts: 3608 - Karma: 89
i knwo it's been said, but get a lense that fits the camera, good followcamming though
Jun 1 2006 7:59PM
0 0
profile picture
ski_cartel
Posts: 6598 - Karma: 18
yea it was pretty good, but this thread will be gone soo due to the pictures
Jun 1 2006 8:20PM
0 0
profile picture
bpalmer
Posts: 2408 - Karma: 93
Badass rapper + education + pissed off = immortal tech.

Anyways, sick segment, needs more rails to be interesting, it seemed like a lot of the shots were very similar but I understand the time and footage constraints.

Really dig the skiing though, the tweaks on the grabs were very smooth.
Jun 1 2006 10:02PM
0 0
profile picture
bighit
Posts: 1178 - Karma: 33
i thought it was sick
Jun 1 2006 10:20PM
0 0
profile picture
aussiejibber
Posts: 183 - Karma: 22
hahaha that bitch can take it all
Jun 2 2006 4:03AM
0 0
profile picture
iLLbiLLy
Posts: 2865 - Karma: 2,631
north carolina, app ski mountain
Jun 2 2006 10:07AM
0 0
profile picture
CooksCorner
Posts: 3939 - Karma: 22
Get rid of those two shots from the side of the jump. They make the kicker look really small compared to the other shots.
Jun 2 2006 11:10AM
0 0
profile picture
iLLbiLLy
Posts: 2865 - Karma: 2,631
thats not the same jump... the ones from from the side were just of a hip we threw togather one day
Jun 4 2006 10:12AM
0 0
profile picture
gregor
Posts: 1069 - Karma: 83
CHANGE THE SONG!!!
Its way too angry dude!
Jun 4 2006 10:22AM
0 0
profile picture
Wu-TangSkier
Posts: 106 - Karma: 10
haha, so funny
Jun 4 2006 10:28AM
0 0
All times are Eastern (-4)