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COR.E
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Now that i have your attention, to make a long story short. its 2am here, i have an ad for a local girls skateshop that is supposed to be going through the front door of the shop in 12 hours. ok, doesnt sound so bad, i crushed myself in the park a while ago and the time i didnt spend in bed because i couldnt get up was spent rebuilding my muscles so i have basically had 4 days to do this with the job and rehabing my damn leg. i need your guy's opinion on what needs to stay and go. Some of the best art i have ever seen has been on this site, i know you guys are out there and any help would be much appriciated.

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May 11 2006 7:43PM
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Liam.
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May 11 2006 8:27PM
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Liam.
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it took me awhile to see that it was a girl but i dont think that is much of a problem...i like how the flower or whatever is in the back...not much to say other then a view touchups but i dont know how to describe it like the font is weird hard to read sorta
May 11 2006 8:28PM
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pierceme
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This is one of my favorite fonts and i think it'd look good on that pic. Its called freebooter script and you can download it here: http://www.1001freefonts.com/fonts/ffonts7.htm if u want. Other than that the only suggestion I can make is to clean up the edges around the girl a bit.
May 11 2006 8:55PM
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Mr_Bojangles
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^that font would look dope, perhaps give the girl a bit more definition, although she definately does stand out against the black, but I reckon her outline could be cleaner
May 12 2006 5:02AM
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COR.E
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the new one
May 12 2006 6:42AM
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Mr_Bojangles
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^I'm a fan
May 12 2006 7:40AM
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skiinscotland
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much better than the first
the girl looks more 3D insted of a flat image
and the text looks better
May 12 2006 5:08PM
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Skipig25
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I like the fact that you made her skin a little darker instead of pure white, but you can kind of see lines there where it was burned, so you might want to smooth that out
May 12 2006 5:28PM
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Skipig25
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I like it tho. nice job
May 12 2006 5:29PM
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