CRITIQUE MY SOUND DESIGN

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CRITIQUE MY SOUND DESIGN

gnarRat

Posts: 105 - Karma: 992

Mar 13 2018 9:54PM

Made this for a film class assignment, the project was to add sound to a montage we made. All the sound effects are fake and added by me, let me know what you think of the sound design and editing overall. I know the skiing is bad but other than that tear me apart.

https://vimeo.com/259981166

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schoeski

Posts: 126 - Karma: 1,524

Mar 14 2018 4:10AM

Water droplets were so unlegit. Noticed it straight away. If your after that then cool, but I felt you like you weren't.

Also, where did you find the sliding on rails sfx? I'm always looking for rail sounds

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Malcolm

Posts: 15949 - Karma: 9,432

Mar 14 2018 10:43AM

The rails sounded like ceramic, but they sort of worked for this. I'm not one to judge rail sounds though.

schoeskiAlso, where did you find the sliding on rails sfx? I'm always looking for rail sounds

I'm also on the hunt for good rail sfx.

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RW_Visuals

Posts: 219 - Karma: 248

Mar 14 2018 3:08PM

schoeskiWater droplets were so unlegit. Noticed it straight away. If your after that then cool, but I felt you like you weren't.

Also, where did you find the sliding on rails sfx? I'm always looking for rail sounds

Take a microphone and go foley for the SFX. It shouldn't take to long to get a few sliding rail sounds if you foley it yourself.

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LukasSchroeder

Posts: 1460 - Karma: 2,683

Mar 14 2018 3:10PM

yeah the water droplets sounded like the clocking sort of sound you make with your tongue and the roof of your mouth?

not sure what the parameters were but could you not have gone to the mountain and recorded foley?

also what was your mark on this?

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gnarRat

Posts: 105 - Karma: 992

Mar 15 2018 10:08PM

It was an in class assignment we had to use effects from YouTube

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levibonn

Posts: 29 - Karma: 142

Mar 22 2018 12:19AM

Not bad, What you should do is take a stero mic and record some of those sounds while they are happening and then you can use them later

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