Not too bad man, a handful of the fillers I would of cut out and you could still progress the story, flowed nice with the song, and that circle fade to black you did near the end made me expect credits to pop up then bam more video kinda took me out of the vibe right there. All in all pretty good, maybe try and work on the audio a little more?

Way to many fillers but besides that I thought it was pretty good! Also the white balance changes a bit throughout and if you change that it will be much better