Filming: In my opinion it was dope! The first two segments were especially dope. Great angles and it was all pretty smooth.
Editing: It was pretty good in the second segment but I think you could work a bit on having a bette correlation between the music and the footage. Think about the feel of the song and make the editing accordingly.
Music: When Simon and Garfunkel came on I said to myself "finally something different". It is a hard song to edit to though. Again try to show that dark feeling of the music in your editing. But yeah props for doing something different and making edit with something other than "Gang$ta rAp"...
In general I really enjoyed the edit and I must say the skiing was dope as well!
It's not like I'm an edit or film expert but that was just my thoughts :)