Another Edit Critique

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Another Edit Critique

gooser

Posts: 178 - Karma: 3,613

Jun 2 2015 12:50PM

I shot this edit of a friend out at Breckenridge over my Spring Break. I am only looking to receive feedback on the edit itself (flow, color, sound...) instead of the rider's skill.

I shot the edit in one day, for time was a bit of an issue.

I watched Bobby Brown's "One Run" a few days before the trip, and decided I wanted to shoot for a similar type of edit!

All feedback is appreciated!

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lcoopman

Posts: 275 - Karma: 1,842

Jun 2 2015 7:44PM

Risky move posting a vid of a snowboarder. But otherwise it looked pretty good. I noticed a view of the first shots were a little blurry is this what you were going for or were you out of focus?

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CrotchKiller

Posts: 9037 - Karma: 6,940

Jun 3 2015 6:04PM

First 15 seconds would have made a cool into. Nothing happened in the rest of it though...

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