When I critique I pretty much only say the negative things so don't get down/ feel bad.

-bit to much of an intro for how long the edit was

-can see the shadow of camera in some shots

-shaky motion of camera, especially in opening

-kind of receptive

Don't worry, everybody's early edits need improvement, the best thing you can do is get critique and improve

I just deleted the video because ill just make a more polished edit in the future.

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