Dont cut the song out when they crash and the other times. You could have put that at end or beginning to make it better. Also make sure you get broll. It got pretty boring just watching straight skiing for almost 4 minutes. A good edit has broll every 3-4 shots(3 shots of skiing, 1 broll)
I also agree with the titles and color correction as well.
"You put on your boots, click into your bindings, dust the snow off your skis, and head out for the chair, and it doesn't matter that you failed a test, didn't get the girl, or that your life is on a one way trip down the shitter, your world is right for the next couple of hours."