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hemlockjibber8nothing? not even eheath?
StokeFactor... Most people here won't just hate and tear your edit apart... the feedback is generally constructive and people are trying to help you get better.
For your edit I think some shots look a bit flat and could use some color correction, and yea for the type of shots you're taking a tripod would be useful. Good luck with your future videos.