Thanks guys! NS comes through again. Length wise I couldn't figure out a way to have the edit shorter and still use that song, what do ya'll think of that song? I have one friend who hates it. maybe change the song? I totally hear you on the length thing Tom, thanks for pointing it out.
Not film burn, haha, sun flairs, are they that annoying? I didn't really try for that hip flare look except for that shot in the beginning. Is it too much?
Also I completely agree on the smoothness issue, I just couldn't get it to flow better, back to the drawing board I guess...
Thanks to all and please keep the critiques coming!