No, but I'm going to be a harsh critic.
Where does it end on the sides, it seems to have been cut off, unsymmetrically.
It's quite dense, there is a lot of black.
Colour of the text is bad, better to keep that white.
The little band (let's just call that the river) seems to be a bit of an extra addition that's not really necessary.
Even though I like the very stylized cuts for the mountains, it looks like quite an alien range because of the symmetry, mountain ranges are not that symmetrical.
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