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Ice_Cream_Man
Posts: 884 - Karma: 41

Here are some logos for my name, "Frankie Ballou." Feel free to say what you like, i mean in America we do have the freedom of speech. Karma for feedback always.... Looking forward to your responses..

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Dec 24 2012 2:14PM
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JAHpow
Posts: 7282 - Karma: 17,169
The second pic looks cool, the first pic I thought were butts
Dec 24 2012 5:50PM
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Spinoza
Posts: 12763 - Karma: 3,844
I think it's pretty sweet. What is it for?
Dec 24 2012 6:23PM
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shea.
Posts: 1606 - Karma: 193
bottom pick looks like dicks next to each other
Dec 24 2012 6:55PM
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Miomo
Posts: 4302 - Karma: 14,131
Last pic looks like boobies
Dec 24 2012 6:56PM
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.tony
Posts: 321 - Karma: 74
Looks pretty nice to me. Copy it into a vector art program or something on the computer to edge it up and shit. I have always been into making logos, this is for sure a nice piece. Good job man.
Dec 24 2012 7:21PM
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Leafs2323
Posts: 355 - Karma: 195
last pic is the best
Dec 24 2012 7:38PM
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Ice_Cream_Man
Posts: 884 - Karma: 41
much appreciated for your comments, karma ++++
Dec 27 2012 5:58PM
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Dr.Dealgood
Posts: 2587 - Karma: 1,352
The first and third one in your first picture are my favorites.

Some of them sort of remind me of the Timberline logo, but that's besides the point.

I really like the your work in regards to its emphasis on hard lines, geometry, and being devoid of color. Instead of just hard lines though maybe think of altering the density or using crosshatching to achieve the effect? In particular I'm thinking of: if you layered F and B they sort of match except for the lower R corner, maybe that is dense and where your lettering diverges you use cross hatching as opposed to black lines of varying thickness. That's confusing. Haha, I hope you get what I'm saying.

When I've done this in the past it's always helped to begin with a basic concept and explode it into a bunch of confusing and more complex iterations, figure out the elements I like best and re-begin the process. Looks like that's what you're doing, thumbs up. Just don't get stuck in the repeating the same elements again and again, take a walk and come back to it with some fresh eyes. Keep going!
Dec 27 2012 6:08PM
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shorty_T
Posts: 2725 - Karma: 761
#3 and #5(the second pic) are the coolest.
Dec 27 2012 6:12PM
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iFlip
Posts: 4541 - Karma: 19,089
I honestly think they are all terrible. Not a single one is even remotely recognizable as your initials. You're trying too hard.
Dec 27 2012 6:32PM
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Ice_Cream_Man
Posts: 884 - Karma: 41
thank you all for the feedback, much appreciated
Dec 28 2012 2:04AM
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Ice_Cream_Man
Posts: 884 - Karma: 41
Bump
Jan 3 2013 1:51AM
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POWDER.RANGER
Posts: 1698 - Karma: -24
i like the bottom one the best but id loose the top b thingy so it looks like a lower case b but with a upper case B in the b g.
Jan 3 2013 2:04AM
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arturkaikll
Posts: 105 - Karma: 35
The bottom pic is the coolest and most clearest in my opinion
Jan 3 2013 3:22AM
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grapejuice3000+
Posts: 2132 - Karma: 1,985
i had an assignment like this in eighth grade and i won like five awards for my finished product, id say they are all too complicated, keep it simple dayn
Jan 3 2013 3:48AM
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Janky
Posts: 1323 - Karma: -100
last pic but what for? could help u alot.
Jan 3 2013 3:52AM
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B-runge
Posts: 16558 - Karma: 360
listen to this expert!
Jan 3 2013 4:05AM
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shr@gler
Posts: 1233 - Karma: 912
Why are you turning your name into dicks?
Jan 3 2013 6:31AM
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cwillygood
Posts: 6831 - Karma: 1,829
little hard to tell its FB
Jan 3 2013 7:05AM
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Lt-Aldo-Raine
Posts: 2309 - Karma: 120
#3 for sure, all i see is a pair of tits in the last one.
Jan 3 2013 12:02PM
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Nacho+
Posts: 3748 - Karma: 7,791
i like the first and the fith
Jan 3 2013 12:04PM
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Tortid
Posts: 361 - Karma: 151
First one for sure. It stands out the most to me for sure.
Jan 3 2013 12:10PM
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Caucasian_Asian
Posts: 2447 - Karma: 1,665
I don't get it.
Jan 3 2013 12:15PM
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WakaShocka
Posts: 640 - Karma: 111
I really like the third from the top
Jan 3 2013 2:45PM
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pat_in_the_hat
Posts: 3019 - Karma: 2,695
looks like youre from california. heres their branding website http://www.cdfa.ca.gov/ahfss/Livestock_ID/index.html. Its going to be very expensive to have someone make it cause its too damn complicated. and good luck making it haha. and why the hell and you branding yourself anyway? if i were you, i would do a FB bar. such as in number 18 here. (a B instead of the D naturally) it would be much easier and cleaner to read once it scars over Click for larger image
Jan 3 2013 3:01PM
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jblaski
Posts: 5561 - Karma: 1,027
Oh look, ANOTHER NS'er that sees dicks in everything they look at....
Jan 3 2013 3:07PM
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pat_in_the_hat
Posts: 3019 - Karma: 2,695
excuse me, a reversed F B bar. i need to proof read what i type
Jan 3 2013 3:10PM
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NotGhood
Posts: 2809 - Karma: 1,255
they all look like a minecraft character from the waist down.
Jan 3 2013 4:07PM
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Zimmerman
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3 for sure
Jan 3 2013 4:12PM
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Jeebus.
Posts: 4904 - Karma: 5,822
Why do you need a logo for your name? You're not ralph lauren.
Jan 3 2013 4:29PM
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Ice_Cream_Man
Posts: 884 - Karma: 41
bump
Jan 4 2013 2:04AM
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