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Critique my new Mt Hood edit!

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Downtofilm
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Hey M&A,

Just wrapped up another video from down in Hood.

Had a super sick time shooting with some good riders.



If you have any feedback please let me know!

Thanks
Nov 12 2012 1:41PM
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NickVentura
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That was such a sick edit dude! I love it Did you shoot in 60fps?
Nov 12 2012 5:16PM
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Moosen
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Really liked it. Great song. Good vibe. Some of the shots were very creative. A+
Nov 12 2012 5:44PM
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WillStart
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so sick dude, I fully approve of the song choice.


I found the jump cuts at :30 a little awkward. Not enough of a musical cue. Also not a very strong shot compared to your others, I probably would have just cut it.

The tramp seg ran a little long and I got a bit bored during this part.

The glidecam shots of woodsy on the dfd were banger. Once again, I would have cut that shot at 3:24. It's not obvious enough what the viewer should be focusing on. The edit ended in a weird spot too. I would have liked to see him drop out of frame. I'm guessing the last part of that trick was super sloppy and that's why you cut it.

Other than that, lots of awesome shots. Good work man

Nov 12 2012 6:01PM
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heath
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Shit ghey
Nov 12 2012 6:14PM
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MatRich
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DAT LAST SHOT :O
Nov 12 2012 8:24PM
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JuliusJ
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really liked the dfd with woodsy, liked how it was a shallow dof with the glidecam. feel like that is a rare thing to see
Nov 12 2012 9:39PM
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BolderPro
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I really liked it! had some good vibe to it!
Nov 12 2012 10:23PM
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CrotchKiller
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63*
Nov 13 2012 11:07AM
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HWW
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Wow, great edit!
Nov 13 2012 11:51AM
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CrotchKiller
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Sick edit Zac, snowboarder did not belong in there at all though
Nov 13 2012 12:21PM
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Brock.
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Dude, the lead into the first shot was framed perfectly... like, the movement and timing was amazing. You could have tweaked the direction by rotating it slightly, but that little sequence was pure gold. Really, really nice job.


Nov 13 2012 3:21PM
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WillStart
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I think he probably had to include him because it's an edit for the academy. That kid shreds a lot harder than he did in the edit, I saw him sending it over the summer.
Nov 13 2012 3:58PM
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CrotchKiller
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Ahh i see. That wasn't a stab at snowboarding at all. Just that his level of riding was not up to par with the rest.
Nov 13 2012 4:02PM
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t_rob
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True but I think it more how he ate shit on his first shit.


I have a mental barrier against nick goepper on rails that I don't think I'll ever get over.
Nov 13 2012 4:04PM
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vault.
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That was so sick, good job.
Nov 13 2012 7:14PM
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plorr
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Dammit I really wanted to use that song in an edit. Great job though, your glidecam work never fails to impress me.
Nov 13 2012 9:16PM
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tcgoldman
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job well done once again. not to much to critique except maybe just more meaningful cuts and less random ones i guess. but nothing else
Nov 13 2012 11:36PM
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