I was assigned to make a short video exploring something that was happening in my community. I chose the skatepark topic because i have been hearing about it since i was a little kid and i want to have a part in making it happen. It would be very much appreciated if you guys could give me a critique on it so that i can improve it before i have to turn it in. The biggest thing that i don't like is the titles. I know they aren't good and i just can't seem to be able to figure out how to get them to look natural. I will give +k for critiques, especially the ones that can help me improve the video. Thanks!
