Papa from goodie pocket films on Vimeo.
I am hoping to get some more b-roll of his military memorabilia next time I visit...
Just a couple of notes I took down while watching:
-Audio sounded really good
-Loved the black and white
-Wasn't sold on the crop when I first started watching but it grew on me and I think I like it
Didn't like the snap zoom at 1:35, seemed forced and it was a bit shaky.
2:18 - Don't really know what the point of leaving color in the flower was. Seemed like you were trying to emphasize it, but I don't think it had anything to do with the story. Same thing with the eggs. It gave the shot more character, just wasn't feeling it
The slider shot with your reflection is super obvious. Next time try throwing on a polarizer filter, that should help eliminate a little bit of the glare. Won't get rid of your reflection, but it should help.
At 4:51 the cut to the feet was a bit awkward. I like the shot, but it didn't really fit in
Overall I thought it was reallly well done, good job