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Critique my Timelapse edit please

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Pool.
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so my friend is serving a monthlong ban that he asked for cuz he wanted to study for finals but made a timelapse edit and wanted feedback from ns, so here it is, thansk for any feedback

A Day. from Jacob Weiss on Vimeo.


heres the link if embed doesnt work
http://vimeo.com/35228771
Jan 18 2012 12:08AM
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west-coast
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that was so dope good work! minus the shitty song but the visuals, especially the fireworks was legit
Jan 18 2012 12:27AM
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SwagginWagon
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Wow that was really dope man. Keep Swaggin. Great Key frames
Jan 18 2012 2:13AM
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Pool.
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my friend wants this bumped
Jan 18 2012 11:23PM
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SNP_CREW
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that was awesome man I loved it. I posted it on facebook because i want kids to see that. Also I was wondering what effect he used in alot of the shots, where the color kinda takes over the screen. thanks
Jan 18 2012 11:39PM
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Pool.
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sweet thanks a lot, ill ask him what he did
Jan 19 2012 12:47AM
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west-coast
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its called film burn, rarely an effect in softwares. download a clip off youtube or something, just make sure to not overuse it
Jan 19 2012 1:48AM
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MLeone
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Holy fuck, that was awesome, I actually really enjoyed it and thought the song went well with it. So many good shots in there! Is he looking for a critique?
Jan 19 2012 8:25AM
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Pool.
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yeah hes looking for a critique
Jan 19 2012 8:03PM
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Bmo.
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really cool! loved just about every shot
Jan 19 2012 8:40PM
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Pool.
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thanks!
Feb 1 2012 1:11AM
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Powderhauser
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so sick and i actually liked the song
Feb 1 2012 2:31AM
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Chunter
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The song fit so good, just too many film burns in my opinion.
Feb 1 2012 2:04PM
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Bmo.
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i was gonna suggest this as well. 1 or 2 looks good, any more and it becomes too amateur
Feb 1 2012 2:17PM
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