I would say to chose a situation that is more realistic acording to their age. The asian guy probably doesnt work at a place like that right now, it just looks like a kid trying to wear his dads suit.
like if you had a meeting with some investors and you decided to wear a suit that is way too big for you and does not fit you. It will look out of place and as if you are trying to emulate a character, you will lose all credibility. Its the same type of thing to me with people playing characters out of their age spectrum.
lower on the vignets a bit and the flares. A good videoclip stands out without having to add those things.
last thing is the bearded guy was often slightly out of focus.
other than that, the vibe and all was good and I liked the general feel of it. the office shots were very nice, loved the window shot.
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