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twsnow22
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So one of my good friends (might see this on here ha) got engaged.. He has no money so he asked if I would do his engagements. I have never done anything like this, and no basically nothing about photography beyond what I learned in my highschool photography class(nothing). I was just wondering if these are legit enough to send to him/his family without being embarrassed ha. Also would you guys give me some tips, we may have time to try to take some pictures again soon if these are not good enough.
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Jan 16 2012 11:05PM
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grahmcracker
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They look fine... And if anybody says shit just say you get what you pay for and this case they're getting more.
Jan 17 2012 12:06AM
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MLeone
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Yeah man they look good!
Jan 17 2012 1:00PM
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zbphoto
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You'll probably get more concrete & critical advice in the photo cult. I sent you an invite.

Here's the critique thread. You do have to critique a photo before you post though.
https://www.newschoolers.com/ns/cult/forumthread/thread_id/666003/
Jan 17 2012 1:07PM
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DIX~
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Lookin good to me minus the last one. If you're going for silhouettes try to get more than just heads imo
Jan 17 2012 1:27PM
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twsnow22
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ha..i was thinking that when i was looking back...thanks for the help..
Jan 17 2012 1:53PM
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hollygrove
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Dude looks twelve and he's getting married.. jus sayin.

I wouldn't worry about it man, the shots are good and in no means will "embarrass" anyone.
Jan 17 2012 2:37PM
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Rob.
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They all look pretty good to me. My only real gripe is with the second one, the brick wall makes me feel like I'm losing sight in my left eye. Maybe try a longer focal length in the future, to not have the wall go right to the edge of the frame. The fourth one is a bit out of focus, but it works.
Jan 17 2012 3:54PM
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alexat955
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yeah this
Jan 17 2012 4:03PM
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twsnow22
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got his girlfriend pregnant and is real christian.. ha hope he sees this.
Jan 17 2012 5:42PM
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MLeone
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how old is he actually?
Jan 17 2012 6:17PM
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twsnow22
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19... the least ideal time to get married.. but thanks for the critiques.. definitely work on some stuff before i do this again.. if I ever do ha.
Jan 17 2012 6:30PM
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