well the colors were a little blah like everyone said but you will get better at those with time. and im not a huge fan of edits that are all POV like that or the majority anyway. maybe if you're doing helmet cam shots use only the best clips you have from that and not so much of the stuff in between but thats just my take on POV. not bad for a first edit tho, just keep tryin different angles and shots with the gopro and use the pole cam to film each other too that works really well with gopro.
oh and as far as your style goes (if you were the one filming)...100% legit with the shutout jacket blue pants and ace of spades....thats the exact same thing i have been wearing for these last couple of weeks :P
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