Personally I think it sounds a bit choppy and repetitive.
Here's what I would suggest doing...
Try adding more "reverb" to the beats to give them some depth
Make the notes less marcotto(sp) aka just less cut and dry, try filling the notes out more.
A good thing that I would do is maybe have a biuldup section and a drop. In the beginning or middle of the song.
Also, try adding a semi continous sub bass liine that has a little bit of wobble.
Hope this helped a lttle.
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