It's rap so if you don't want to listen, please don't waste your time with a comment.
For those of you that would like to help me out. Please give me some constructive criticism on how I could improve the song. This is the first one I've done everything myself chorus and all three verses. My buddy sampled the beat from Everlast and did the rest from scratch.
It's more of a lyric song more than anything. I tried telling a story maybe it worked?
Any input on the beat lyrics, song, flow, would be much appreciated. Thanks!
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