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Critique My Edits (Please) :)

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ski-swagga
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I posted one of these edits in the "Official Critique My Edit Thread" and got one response (it was good but i want more opinions) . Please Critique everything. :) +k for in depth respnoses Thanks!
Apr 8 2010 9:20PM
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Juice.Doctor
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hey man. those were ghood edits... but you should try some more creative shots and like follow the skier for a couple jibs. also, the intro to the first vid was really long.
Apr 8 2010 9:41PM
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ski-swagga
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thanks :) and yeah it's jsut to much easier to post up and get shots also those were filmed with a 150$ cam so the stability isnt good. yeah i probably shoulda sped it up! thanks +K :)
Apr 8 2010 10:05PM
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Turner.
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I enjoyed both edits and probably preferred the first.
your shots definitely look better with the tripod, because the shaky camera was taking away from the skiing.
also, some of the shots of the jump hits when you started at a closer view and then moved back were frustrating because there was less detail from further away.
definitely enjoyed the skiing in both edits keep it up.
btw that park is ghetto as fuck.
Apr 8 2010 11:40PM
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ski-swagga
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why thank you :)
and yeah some of the close shots got a little too close and the skiers head, legs, or even whole body was out of the shot so if i wanted that clip i'd have to cut it and settle for a further away shot that got the whole skier.
thanks for the critique, and i know my hill is less than 300 ft and we are "non profit" so we dont have a park crew so if we want something done we have to build it. so 20% of our time on the hill is building and maintaining features. at least it's skiing haha :) +K for you!
Apr 9 2010 7:09PM
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Brock.
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angles weren't very good. try and get the whole trick in the shot, most of those clips didn't show the landing

Apr 9 2010 8:21PM
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ski-swagga
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yeah i agree, i need more landing shots and better angles.
Apr 11 2010 2:32PM
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A.Eberhard
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Well i already did the first video in the other thread, and I'll say pretty much the same as everyone else. I would go for a wide angle lens so you can get nice and close and that jump is really awkwardly built and ghetto so I would recommend getting your skier to do the same trick twice and film it from two different angles.
Apr 11 2010 5:42PM
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ski-swagga
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alright thanks again! and ill look into wide angle lenses. :) +k!
Apr 11 2010 10:00PM
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ski-swagga
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bump!
Apr 12 2010 7:17PM
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ski-swagga
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Apr 17 2010 7:01PM
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alexat955
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dont use shots where you didnt land the trick. its really obvious
Apr 24 2010 11:37AM
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ski-swagga
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the only trick i didnt land was the front flip which i am able to land but didnt get any footy of landing it. but i agree a lot of landings (like the backflips) were sketchy but still landed. thanks for the imput! +K
Apr 24 2010 2:31PM
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alexat955
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ok haha that was the only one i noticed but just making sure
Apr 24 2010 2:34PM
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blatt
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Good skiing and you got the shots. Also good editing. My one critique is that you might wanna invest in a tripod (shots were a tad shakey)
Apr 24 2010 8:24PM
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blatt
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Good skiing and you got the shots. Also good editing. My one critique is that you might wanna invest in a tripod (shots were a tad shakey)
Apr 24 2010 8:24PM
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ski-swagga
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thanks :) and yeah i got a tripod halfway through the year and it drastically improved the shot quality. +k
Apr 24 2010 8:42PM
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