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*Fujative*
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Alright so tomorrow we have a rail jam at our local ski shop. Last night we decided to session be before the jam. We put both boxes together to make a 40 footer. It was pretty sick. Just curious to see what you guys think. Tomorrow I will be doing another edit, however I will have my dolly setup, and it will be during day time. I think I'm going to get more detail shots tomorrow. Any ideas will help, thanks.


Nov 7 2009 1:19AM
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debrickshaw
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well filmed
transitions were a bit choppy
the skiing wasn't too great (no hate)
Nov 7 2009 1:35AM
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ski-swagga
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yeah, skiing was ok you were probably a little rusty, song annoyed me a little bit. and thats about it :)
oh and the lighting i thought was wll done.
Nov 7 2009 3:16AM
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-dva-
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i feel like you should always end an edit with a banger of a trick.  make it worth the viewer's while to have stuck it out til the end.  regardless of how good the average level of skiing is, put one of your best shots at the end, not a snowboarder doing a 50-50.  otherwise, it looked like you guys were having fun and it made me jealous that i wasn't skiing so in that sense i'd say it was a success.
Nov 7 2009 3:30AM
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I really wanted to pick some type of music that wasn't that well know without lyrics, its from Oceans 12, during the break dance laser scene. In terms of skiing, ya, I didn't want the same thing over and over again, thats why it would be like 270 on, then fall at the end. As for the boarder at the end, the whole video is 2 guys, I'm in the red hoodie and jeans (2nd form end) and my other friend is the boarder. We both just hit it once, so I just put that in the end.

I'm going out now to film the comp. I'm bring a dolly, hope it turns out pretty sick.
Nov 7 2009 10:10AM
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CS_Films
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I think the song was really cool but wayyy to fast for this edit. There wasent enough action to keep up with the music.
Nov 7 2009 11:19AM
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screamin_seamen
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your friend must want to have gay sex with will wesson
Nov 7 2009 11:42AM
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*Fujative*
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Thanks. I was just messing around, I really wanted to try new music.. Guess it didn't turn out so well. I got video with the dolly... SOOOO SICK!! I'm going to start working on that, however we are going to shoot again. Try to get some more lights+dolly, should be sick.
Nov 7 2009 2:47PM
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averyshyra
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i spy david cohen?
ahah.
but yeah, thos boyne boxes are pretty fun, was on them a few weeks ago.

Nov 7 2009 3:10PM
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Yup Dave is there. I'm pretty sure I have you meet before....
Nov 7 2009 3:58PM
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