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What do you think of my drawing?

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pinkname
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My latest portrait....it's been a while since I drew one, so waht do you think about it?
Sep 15 2009 9:25PM
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bovice29
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I usually hate pictures in pencil but this looks sick, the body looks extremely realistic, great job.
wish i was good at art

Sep 15 2009 9:31PM
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court7ney
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good job!
Sep 15 2009 9:32PM
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purps
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das redicalous. dis my 100th post. biiig numbers flyin. anywho was there a picture to look at when you drew?

either way, its real good

Sep 15 2009 9:32PM
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rj.
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very impressive
Sep 15 2009 9:34PM
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pinkname
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yep the picture is actually MatRich's profile picture...
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Sep 15 2009 9:36PM
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bovice29
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wow those pictures look identical
Sep 15 2009 9:38PM
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purps
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oh word thats ill
Sep 15 2009 9:43PM
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pinkname
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oh, and if any of you have an idea of what i could do as a background...
Sep 16 2009 2:29PM
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eljusto.
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Sick drawing.
Sep 16 2009 4:03PM
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Black-Bandanna
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You're proportions are exceptional, but it's flat. Really flat. Add more value with different hardness of pencils and it'll go from good to great. And for the background if you don't feel like doing what's in the picture, you could always do a vague, blendy, snowish background with a shadow. That could be dope. Pretty good job though.
Sep 16 2009 4:09PM
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pinkname
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thanks for the advice!
i know i've still got work to do with the shadows and depth, but i've spent s=a lot of time on it, so for now i  have to take a break, or else all i'm gonna do is scrap the drawing...
Sep 16 2009 6:56PM
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kzrstf
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this
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Sep 16 2009 7:03PM
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anxju
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its pretty good but its too two toned. theres grey, and then dark grey. and its too blurry as well. theres no crispiness to the drawing. you gotta make more contrast between the dark and light areas. solid though
Sep 16 2009 7:52PM
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anxju
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take the skier's right boot for example. in the picture, you can clearly see where the boot ends and where the ski begins, but with youre drawing, its all blurred. you gotta shade the edges of the jacket too. dont draw an outline line, but you still gotta shade the outermost part so that it looks rounded. still a very solid drawing though
Sep 16 2009 7:56PM
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pinkname
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sweet, thanks for the critique, I'll take that in consideration!! great advice
i see what you mean by the blurriness, but my scanner isn't of the highest quality, so it isn't as sharp as the actual drawing, but i should work a bit more on that!
Sep 16 2009 8:27PM
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anxju
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also, try doing this. instead of shading like a piece of wood with a grain, try shading in circles around what youre trying to shade. what i mean my that is dont shade all in the same direction, being diagonal in your drawing. it looks better if you shade AROUND what youre shading. for instance, if you shade one of the wrinkles in the jacket, shade wrinkle, then go around the wrinkle, gradually getting lighter. i dunno if youre understanding me lol

Sep 16 2009 8:55PM
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T-Holt
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I like it a lot.  andyju has a lot of good advice, I'm not very good at drawing, but I did take an advanced drawing class so I know a decent amount.
Sep 16 2009 11:59PM
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DrZoidberg
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That's really good.

Also, exactly at the scanner comment, if the scanner isn't good whatever is scanned won't turn out good. That may be affecting the contrast and grayness somebody mentioned earlier. If you have some sort of image editing program, use brightness/contrast or levels to fix that.
Sep 17 2009 4:38PM
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pinkname
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thanks a lot!! i'll keep working on it and try to make it better!! by the way, +k for the advice!


and for the scanner, i did adjust a bit the brightness/contrast....i'm kind of a freak with photoshop, i work with it a lot, but the thing is my scanner makes the drawing even more blurry...i think i'll just take a picture of it next time
Sep 17 2009 6:57PM
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anxju
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no problem, here are a few examples of my drawings

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Sep 18 2009 12:13AM
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pinkname
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I really love the ironman one!!

i eventually want to try drawing bumblebee from transformers, but i get discouraged just by looking at the image....there's so many details to do!
Sep 18 2009 8:28AM
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neutralzombie
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pretty sick! you could work on adding a little more contrast to give it more of a punch! and you could always just do some like mounds sketching to make it look like snow is the background as if it's not like a whole page sketch...unless you wanted it that way... keep up the good work!
Sep 18 2009 1:33PM
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adamlukowski
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If there were Any problems id say there's one little texture thing above his upperlip but stilll Thats Amazing. How long did it take?

Sep 19 2009 9:31PM
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pinkname
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I don't know the exacty number of hours I spent on it, but I spent around 3 days everytime I had a few minutes to spare, I'd open my sketchbook and continue the drawing....

Sep 21 2009 1:55PM
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basedjase
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those are absolutly amazing. i love it. nice work
Sep 21 2009 7:22PM
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no_steeze
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haha i knew that was matrich, nice drawings though, maybe make the tones pop a little more, i think my drawing here pops a lot just because of the use of line weight and darker tones. try just darkening the shading and stuff and using a sharper pencil, just kinda finish it up, other than that, nice work

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Sep 21 2009 8:54PM
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Malcolm
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really good drawing but you picked an incredibly ugly looking kid as your subject
Sep 21 2009 9:12PM
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narwhal
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so you traced it?
Sep 22 2009 12:22AM
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anxju
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using outlines makes it look unreal though. what i suggest is shade the edges darker but dont make em a full definite line, like i did on the christian bale. his face obviously curves away, so there has to be shading, but there is not black line that outlines his face. i made a new drawing by the way, first one since those 3 i posted previously which were done in april

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Sep 22 2009 8:25PM
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StReEtPIRATES
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that first one is  great, not often do i see a drawing that actually makes me stop and just think about it. props man.
Sep 22 2009 11:55PM
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Leafman
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no
Sep 23 2009 2:21AM
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pinkname
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hahaha, thanks Malcolm...i'll make sure to pick a better subject next time
Sep 23 2009 2:04PM
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anxju
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what do you mean no. lets see you make a drawing. she clearly has potential and talent far beyond yours
Sep 23 2009 2:21PM
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Jodi
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Can you redraw and put my initials on the lisence plate. that's as close as I'd ever come to owning this car.
Sep 23 2009 2:23PM
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SteezyOhio
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pretty sweet, i just went through all my school work from last year and colleceted my best doodles and drawings, some arnt bad at all. im a big fan of just black pen and any paper, just like to use lines and strokes to shade it lol
Sep 23 2009 3:04PM
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OneLove_skier
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hahaha
Sep 23 2009 7:41PM
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Leafman
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the massive water mark in the middle ruins it
Sep 23 2009 8:40PM
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pinkname
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sorry for the watermark, but i don't like posting my drawings without it,
I've had some pieces stolen before, so I don't want to take any chances
Sep 23 2009 9:23PM
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Monique*
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THIS IS SICKKKK!!!!!:)
Sep 23 2009 9:44PM
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pinkname
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I like this style, your drawing i really nice, but that wasn't the look I was going for...i'm trying for a more realistic look
i'll continue working on it this weekend and post an updated version!! thanks for all the advices
Sep 25 2009 8:23AM
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